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早D点评之 a famous person  

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上过JOEDY课的小鸭都了解,Joedy有让大家准备的一张经典卡叫a famous person

Joedy当时都有说,这张卡片可以转很多不同的其他变种卡

今天收到了mic小鸭的邮件,发现mic对于转题这个概念掌握得不错,原文摘录如下

对了,红色字体是Joedy的点评哦

 

A famous person you want to meet

Describe a famous person that you would like to meet

You should say

       Who he/she is

       How you got to know him/her

       Why he/she is famous

       How he/she influences you

可转成以下的“人”类卡

A successful person

a man who is good at his/ her job

An elderly person you know

an old interesting man

也可转成“媒体”类卡哦

A type of movie you like

Describe a movie you like

You should say

     What it was about

    When you saw it

    What its influence on you was

And explain the reason why you like it

还可以转成“物品”类卡哦

A picture you like

也可以是“经历”类啊

An interesting experience

 

下面是mic同学对与a famous person 的描述,是讲憨豆先生哦,嘻嘻

准备的很不错,大家学习一下:

 Rowan Atkinson would be the person I’d like to meet.It’s years ago that I first knew about him.He played a role called Mr bean.Mr bean is a wellcomed character of a series of comedy tv programmes.Mr bean is one of the most successful characters to many people.It’s the unique ways Mr bean approaches to his daily life that impress us the most.At the same time.The dumsy image makes Mr bean a family favourite

上面这一小段开头不错,但是最好直接引出主题哦,主题是“你想见的一个名人”啊!

mic开头讲得有点虚,有点官方,太社会主义啦!

应该直截了当表明:我为什么那么喜欢憨豆先生

I remember that in one of his funny stories,Mr bean happens to go for playing goft.But Mr bean isn’t good at the playing,so he makes a number of stupid incidents which make us laugh.The most interesting detail is that Mr bean is told touching the ball is not allowed duting the playing.So Mr bean keeps his promise not to touch the ball by his hands even the little ball once is kicked out of the playing yard.For fetching the ball back to the yard,Mr bean only use the goft stick to catch the ball.But instead succeeds he just makes the ball get longer and longer away from the initial place.And Mr bean just keeps chasing the ball by his goft stick.

这一段节选了憨豆先生最精彩的一个情节,能很好突出中心,但是显得略微拖沓的一点

讲的时候尽量精简一点更好

而且一定要加上你个人当时看到这一段的具体感觉和反应哦

这样会加强你的论述的生动性!总的来说,就是要让你的真实感觉去打动考官!

That is just a simple funny story,but I think it implies that we should show respect to the regulations in daily life no matter in what situations,in this case, I think it one of the most educationable&interesting stories in my life.And I want to meet Rowan Atkinson because I really want to find out if he himself is as funny as the Mr bean he acts in real life.

这个结尾挺好的,画龙点睛

Mic,继续加油咯!!

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