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早DD答疑--关于经典卡(后续)  

2009-12-16 22:10:46|  分类: 致小鸭们 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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早DD:
     我看了你的BLOG啦,多谢你打两篇文章回复我啊!泪流!
     我现在大概明白你的意思了,但是我准备了一张经典卡,但不知道怎样转啊!你看看:
     the person,who i spend most time with at home,is my mother.she is a kind and hardworking woman,and i think the best quality of her is the easy-going personality which makes many people love her.although she is the leader in the company,other workers love to talk and go shopping with her,as she is a good friend of them.what we often do together are shopping,playing tennis and watching tv,although we don't meet frequently.and the thing we most love to do is that we like to have a long talk about experience we took recently during the dinner at weekend.the reason why i spend most time with her is that her thought can keep up with the pace of the fast-changing society.there is little generation gap between us,so what we can talk is so wide,i love her very much.
     这是我的经典卡,但点样转呢?比如转 person who gave you important help, 点答1.What difficulty you met  2.In what situation he/she helped you 3.How he/she helped you呢? 
 
亲爱的小鸭
你那么快就准备好了一张经典卡,很勤奋哦!赞一个!
对于你的经典卡,JOEDY有以下建议
整篇内容太简单咯,太泛泛而谈了,建议在红色字体部分具体加入实例哦!例如,we like to have a long talk about experience,什么experience呢?这里分享的experience中能否加入你妈妈帮助你解决生活或者学习上问题的experience呢?例如你学习上遇到挫折或者情感遇到创伤,妈妈如何与你分享以及如何帮助了你?
如果能加入,那就解决了变种卡中what difficulty you met这个问题咯!
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